The Car Crash Promblem

Brainstorm of ideas:
Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING
PROBLEM
SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
Car crash
A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see
injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone
Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.





Title:
                            The Car Crash Problem
Intro
2 sentences
One breezy cold as Sunday morning at 7:45 a man called Yelnats he was driving a red shiny Ferrari. He was on his way to go pick his friend. His friends name is Jayden but he can call him Jade for short.
Orientation 5-10 sentences
WHEN
WHO
WHAT
WHERE
WHY
HOW
CHARACTERS


  There was a man called Yelnats he was 19 years old, he was wearing his favorite Iron man t-shirt and has his pyjamas.He was with his friend Jayden, Jaden was 19 years old too and wears his cool leather jacket and shorts.
It was a breezy cold Sunday morning at 7:45 Yelnats was driving his shiny red Ferrari car and at 8:05 he picked his phone to call Jayden that he was on his way, then KABOOM!!!!, he didn’t see the car in front of him, he was driving to fast on the mountain road and he flipped his car over by an accident.


Problem
5-10 sentences
He was driving to fast and he didn’t see the car in front of him so because of the energy and the fast of his car he flipped over by driving to fast. He broke his arm and had a brain damage and his ears was ringing. The people in the car going to see what happened and one of them called the 111 to help him. People are shouting what is going on and a lot of beeping noise from the back, shut up come and help here with him.People are asking him are you okay,and he just kept silent.
Solution
5-10 sentences
Luckily one of the people called 111 to help, they are arriving soon, just wait 5 mins, when they arrived the police said to move and we will fix this. The firefighters got out the Jaws of Life and carefully cut the shiny beautiful Ferrari car to get the passenger out of the car and put him in the ambulance.When they got to hospital they quickly put him on a stretcher and roll him to the emergency room, and they grabbed tools to fix his arm and xray his brain.He survive, the doctors called Yelnats parents to come to the hospital.
Conclusion
Less than 5 sentences
He is in the hospital getting better, his car was cutted but at least he survived.