Narrative The cliff

The Cliff

On a Saturday morning, a girl name Lizzie was getting ready for hiking with her brother Max.They are going to climb the huge and tall Mountain, the name of the Mountain is Mt Eden.

So Lizzie woke up very early to go hiking she woke up at 7:20, She get her bag, put her water bottle, snacks,fruit, rope or swiss army knife.Max also done the same thing, then they grab their socks and shoes and head there way outside,Lizzie said”Mom me and Max is going hiking”.

Mom replied “okay honey, did you bring all the stuff you need”.

“Yes mom, bye”.

Max and Lizzie is of their to go to Mt Eden.

“Finally we have arrived to Mt Eden, now let's go and start hiking”. Lizzie said cheerfully.

Max said “okay, but don’t get too over excited because it's a long way up”.

So Max and Lizzie start hiking up the Mountain, as soon as they were almost at the top Lizzie slipped down and now she is holding onto a small branch that is hanging out. Lizzie shouted”help me Max”.

Max couldn’t reach her because Lizzie is a bit out of reach of Max to grab and pull.

”it's alright, here’s what we're going to do, I’m going to get a rope and you grab it and i’ll pull okay”.Max said calmly.

Lizzie shouted with crying”okay, but just make sure that i'll be alright”.

Lizzie grabbed the rope and Max pulled the rope up.

Lizzie said”thanks Max, your the best big brother ever”.

“Should we continue on”.said Max.

“Yes”.Responded Lizzie.

So they continue walking, then they finally reached the top.

“Yes”They both said

Max is on the phone and talking to dad if he can pick them up.

Dad said “yes I’ll be right there in a minute”.

Lizzie grab snacks because she was really tired of the hiking.

Lizzie, Max and Dad are finally at home, Lizzie went to her room looking so sleepy, Max asked “hey, dad can we go hiking next time as a family please”.

“Okay”dad replied.

When Lizzie fall of a cliff good thing Max also bring  rope, and next time they are going on a hiking as a family altogether.