WALT - write paragraphs using
the PEEL acronym
P - Make your point
E - Back it up: support you point
with evidence and examples
E - Explain how the evidence
supports your points
L - Link this to the main point
Topic - Mr and Mrs Gock
contributed a lot to New Zealand
Contribution
They contributed their service
to New Zealand by saving the
kumara and their many inventions.
They won many awards for
contributing. Joe earned the Queen’s
medal. In 2013 they won the
Bledisloe cup for their service
to horticulture. Joe referred to
himself as an experimenter not a
scientist. People could call them
“citizen scientists”.
When the Black Rot disease spread,
Mr and Mrs Gock gifted their
disease resistance to New Zealand.
They refused to take the money
that the Government gave them.
People also made documentaries
about how they saved the kumara
from the Black Rot disease.
Joe and Fay went through
many problems together but solved it
together. They invented stickers on fruit
and the broccoli box. They investigated
and they collected evidence. They had many
ups and downs but they kept trying until they
figured out the solution to the problem.
Mr and Mrs Gock were married in
1956 and had three daughters Jayne, Raewyn and
Virginia. Fay suddenly died from an illness back
on 21 December 2018. We will remember your
service Fay Gock.
By Dwayne
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