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Friday, June 29, 2018

Thursday, June 28, 2018

introduction

One marvelous Monday, there lived a young princess name Ashlyn, in a faraway land in a castle that was a Enormously rich.
She live with her royal family, all the money they get from each store they give each person money to buy food or stuff.
She is 10 years old, she is a wonderful happy princess, she is kind to each everyone, she respect what people are outside and inside.
Ashlyn has a sister name isabella and a brother name Clover.They are happy with each other, when one of them needs help they will help each other.

Once upon a time
One sunny day
One beautiful bright sunny day
One marvelous day
One horrible rainy day
In a faraway land
In the deepest ocean
In the darkest prison
Far far away
In a dark forest
In a vast desert
In a creepy dungeon
In the scary woods
In a haunted house
In a movie set
In a creepy maze
In a wonderful school
In a small town


There was
A beautiful girl
An old man
Royal family
A wise girl
A handsome man
A traveller
A scary monster
A butler
Guards
Handsome prince
beautiful queen
Creepy clown
Young princess
Royal king
Famous celebrity
A gangster bodyguard
A music producer
A sad servant
A sneaky thief
Who was Lost
Enormously rich
Poor
Diva
Who lived in a cottage
Who had 6 sons and 6 daughters
Had a glass eyeball
Had a ginormous family
Lived in las vegas
Who had robotic legs
Who was a marvellous actor
Who only ever had onions
Who was a robber
Who lived on the streets
Part time DJ part time spy
Who had only leg
Who was a murderer
Who was a huge nerd
Who had one fat eye.


Tuesday, June 26, 2018

The Car Crash Promblem


Brainstorm of ideas:
Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING
PROBLEM
SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
Car crash
A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see
injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone
Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.





Title:
                            The Car Crash Problem
Intro
2 sentences
One breezy cold as Sunday morning at 7:45 a man called Yelnats he was driving a red shiny Ferrari. He was on his way to go pick his friend. His friends name is Jayden but he can call him Jade for short.
Orientation 5-10 sentences
WHEN
WHO
WHAT
WHERE
WHY
HOW
CHARACTERS


  There was a man called Yelnats he was 19 years old, he was wearing his favorite Iron man t-shirt and has his pyjamas.He was with his friend Jayden, Jaden was 19 years old too and wears his cool leather jacket and shorts.
It was a breezy cold Sunday morning at 7:45 Yelnats was driving his shiny red Ferrari car and at 8:05 he picked his phone to call Jayden that he was on his way, then KABOOM!!!!, he didn’t see the car in front of him, he was driving to fast on the mountain road and he flipped his car over by an accident.


Problem
5-10 sentences
He was driving to fast and he didn’t see the car in front of him so because of the energy and the fast of his car he flipped over by driving to fast. He broke his arm and had a brain damage and his ears was ringing. The people in the car going to see what happened and one of them called the 111 to help him. People are shouting what is going on and a lot of beeping noise from the back, shut up come and help here with him.People are asking him are you okay,and he just kept silent.
Solution
5-10 sentences
Luckily one of the people called 111 to help, they are arriving soon, just wait 5 mins, when they arrived the police said to move and we will fix this. The firefighters got out the Jaws of Life and carefully cut the shiny beautiful Ferrari car to get the passenger out of the car and put him in the ambulance.When they got to hospital they quickly put him on a stretcher and roll him to the emergency room, and they grabbed tools to fix his arm and xray his brain.He survive, the doctors called Yelnats parents to come to the hospital.
Conclusion
Less than 5 sentences
He is in the hospital getting better, his car was cutted but at least he survived.

Thursday, June 21, 2018

The King Tide- bright sparks

Today the bright sparks had a create task, and the task is to draw a picture of how the sun and the moon make King Tide

The Moon- LIGHT NIGHT


Today what the brights sparks create task is to draw a picture of the moon.

HOuse on fire

eTitle: Room 7  Co-constructed narrative
Labels: writing


House on fire
Hear sirens going off - firemen are coming
Put the fire out with water hosesImage result for fire house
Smoke is strong
Problem - there might be people inside?!
PS4 is still inside. - valuables
Clothes are inside.
Might be cats or dogs inside

Playing fortnite- little boy poured water on the plug.
Little boy - craig. Blonde hair, 1 metre high, 8 years old, freckles, brown eyes, short curly hair, fortnite t shirt, drinking water, laughed and dropped the cup, or got angry, screamed.


Title
Fire in the house
Introduction
One sunny beautiful Saturday Craig was playing Fornite with his friend Jack. They had been playing all day long.
Orientation
Craig was a 8 year old boy with blonde, curly hair and chocolate brown eyes. He was wearing his favourite turquoise Fornite shirt and seafoam pants. Jack was 9 and had jet black hair and bright blue eyes. The two boys were playing Fornite in the lounge at Craig’s house. The lounge looked like a pigs sty, with stinky socks, pizza boxes and mountain dew cans everywhere.
Problem
Craig was sooo engrossed in his game. He leapt out of the bus, pressed X and landed on one of the houses. Craigs thumbs and fingers were starting to ache from playing for sooo long without a break. Jack thought a glass of water might wake him up, so he went to get his friend a cool glass of icy water. He was just strolling back into the messy lounge, when he heard Craig scream “OHHH YEAH HEADSHOT!”. It gave Jack such a fright that he dropped the glass of water, and “Oh no!” he screamed, it tipped straight onto the electrical plug. Craig sniffs “sniff sniff”, “I can smell smoke, is the oven on?”. Jack yells “THERE’S A FIRE, HELP!”. Craig finally looks up from his game to see that the PS4 caught on fire! Craig thought to himself “Dang it, I was about to win!”. The two boys rushed outside leaving all their valuables behind.
Solution
Jack ran to the neighbours house and asked to borrow Lucy’s phone. “HELP HELP OUR HOUSE IS ON FIRE!”. Craig could hear the sirens of the fire engines getting closer and closer. Jack and Craig tried to comfort each other, but they were panicking so much and couldn’t hear each other over the sirens and blaring smoke alarms. The firetrucks arrived and extinguish the flames in 1 long hour.
Conclusion
The two boys felt depressed. Their game was over, and they didn’t win. And now… their house was destroyed.

Monday, June 18, 2018

Night light

The bright sparks read a book called Night light by David Hill.

Friday, June 15, 2018