Friday, July 27, 2018

how do we predict the weather?

weather conditions.

weather is made of

The sleepover

You invited your friend Jayden,Clora,Louis,Claudia on a sleepover and they said yes. Should you invite them on Sunday or Saturday?

You invite them on Sunday you woke up and forgot to do your homework.
You invite them on Saturday you woke up you still got time to do your homework.

You invite them on Sunday you woke up and forgot to do your homework.

When you played Truth of Dare.
You picked truth. Oh no! Now you have to tell your deepest darkest secret….

You get to chose your dare do you want to...
Play Bloody Mary
You played hopscotch BORING!!!!

Hey, do you want to do to sleep early or stay up all night?
They sleep early and wake up scared.once they watch the horror movie.

Should we make breakfast or go out?
Made their own breakfast
Go out for breakfest

                       THE END
You have survived your first ever sleepover.

choose-your-own-story plan

Copy of Word/master Vocabulary Finder

Monday, July 23, 2018

Narrative The cliff

The Cliff

On a Saturday morning, a girl name Lizzie was getting ready for hiking with her brother Max.They are going to climb the huge and tall Mountain, the name of the Mountain is Mt Eden.

So Lizzie woke up very early to go hiking she woke up at 7:20, She get her bag, put her water bottle, snacks,fruit, rope or swiss army knife.Max also done the same thing, then they grab their socks and shoes and head there way outside,Lizzie said”Mom me and Max is going hiking”.

Mom replied “okay honey, did you bring all the stuff you need”.

“Yes mom, bye”.
Max and Lizzie is of their to go to Mt Eden.

“Finally we have arrived to Mt Eden, now let's go and start hiking”. Lizzie said cheerfully.

Max said “okay, but don’t get too over excited because it's a long way up”.
So Max and Lizzie start hiking up the Mountain, as soon as they were almost at the top Lizzie slipped down and now she is holding onto a small branch that is hanging out. Lizzie shouted”help me Max”.
Max couldn’t reach her because Lizzie is a bit out of reach of Max to grab and pull.
”it's alright, here’s what we're going to do, I’m going to get a rope and you grab it and i’ll pull okay”.Max said calmly.
Lizzie shouted with crying”okay, but just make sure that i'll be alright”.
Lizzie grabbed the rope and Max pulled the rope up.
Lizzie said”thanks Max, your the best big brother ever”.
“Should we continue on”.said Max.
“Yes”.Responded Lizzie.
So they continue walking, then they finally reached the top.
“Yes”They both said
Max is on the phone and talking to dad if he can pick them up.
Dad said “yes I’ll be right there in a minute”.
Lizzie grab snacks because she was really tired of the hiking.

Lizzie, Max and Dad are finally at home, Lizzie went to her room looking so sleepy, Max asked “hey, dad can we go hiking next time as a family please”.
“Okay”dad replied.

When Lizzie fall of a cliff good thing Max also bring  rope, and next time they are going on a hiking as a family altogether.

Monday, July 2, 2018

Focusing on writing a dialog

Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
How to use speech marks
Before and after the talking.
How to put in other punctuation
? goes on the inside of the speech mark.
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
When 2 people are talking or more.
Different words for ‘said’
A different word for said is respond,asked,or even replied,or ask , responded politely,yelled,mubbling,mutting,gasp,screming,yel
Adding adverbs
Screaming angrily.yelling angrily,shouting,

“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.

”Good afternoon Dwyane. How was your day?”Asked Sumuree.
“It was good” replied Dwyane.

“Good afternoon Sumuree, how was your lovely day?” Waiari asked with a smile.

“It is a miserable day for me”

“Why Sumuree?”Questioned Waiari.
“Because my papa died, and I was upset”.

“Hi Dwyane,how was your weekend?"
Asked Waiari.

“It was so tiring”.